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Comment by Shalini Raman on August 19, 2010 at 11:25pm
Thanks for visiting Dinesh and Prosenjit (I missed out seeing your comment on this pic, I wonder how!!)
@Prosenjit: Thanks for your inputs.. I can understand what you mean here.. your critiques are always welcome, and appreciated
@Dinesh: yes, that's my sign ;)
Comment by Din Toon on August 19, 2010 at 12:33pm
nice doggy. and a pretty owner :o)
there's a lady's face in profile at the end of her hair. that intentional..?
Comment by Prosenjit Roy on August 15, 2010 at 5:22am
This is very nice Shalini. And your other portrait too. I see that you have a natural feel for the eyes, which are really globes fitted inside a cup. Sometimes we tend to simply 'draw' them on the surface, as if they are flat objects. Very nice turning of the eyes indeed.

On a very minor technical nitpick, I wonder if the corner of the mouth on her right side is dragging down by just a wee bit. Unless a person a smirking, the line passing through the two corners are generally parallel to those passing under the nose, and the inner/outer corners of the eyes.

Having said that, on second thoughts, there is an issue of perspective here and you have good justification in drawing the mouth the way you have. Those parallels I have mentioned are also subject to perspective, and in a pose such as this, would tend to slightly 'converge' towards the far side - don't know if I could make any sense at all!

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